unit 8 progress

unit 8 progress

week one: 10th march

In week one I have made a start of writing my proposal either Wednesday of Friday my band will sit down and talk about what we want to do and when we want to do it. Which will help with the aims of this unit. We will also be using all our originals songs which saves us time, so we wont have to write anymore songs 

This is my first draft of the proposal:

tomorrow i will be going through my proposal again to improve such as section 3 evaluation as over the next coming months well be having group discussing to go through what we have achieved so far and what needs to be improved such as a reflection of what needs to be done and what has been done.

11th march 

I asked what i could improve i have taken advice which leads me to my 

second draft: 

12th march

I took the advice which i was given and I have improved section one rationale 

by writing a list and developing a  paragraph out of it 

These where the points I made:

 

Then this trail number 4 which was the final piece

Rational:

I was also able to complete the project concept i asked for feedback and improved what i had originally wrote making sure i was sticking to the guidelines i was given and not to drone on this was the final outcome 

Project concept:

with the evaluation i have written it twice already and i will be getting feedback 

 trail 3 evaluation:

using the feedback which was given to me this is what i was able to take from it

 4 evaluation:

The final bit to the project proposal will be making the project planning timetable sheet which i will complete today or tomorrow then i can add that to my project proposal and can be added here

Timetable sheet

 

Week two

17th march

This was the finale time table which i will be getting feedback 

I felt very confident in writing my project proposal and doing the time table which i have submitted is appealing to the eyes because it will make you look at it more and taking information in.

over the next few days i want to start the guitar track and vocal tracks as with some research to get that i can use or do to make the project better i have saved time by reusing songs that have been performed then doing them as acapella.

what we will be working on is the track and voice rehearsing each week to get the song better